• 0x0@infosec.pub
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    16 hours ago

    You should work on formatting if you want people to read that.

    • jellywithin@lemmy.zip
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      15 hours ago

      What do you mean by formatting? I just read it and it is fine. And if its about length, I was able to read it during my shift, I think pretty much everyone could do easily.

      • raspberriesareyummy@lemmy.world
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        15 hours ago

        I’d say the comment is readable, but could benefit from formatting and some more concise expressions on some places. Using words whose meaning is not universally understood by people with average to mid-high education is counterproductive to spreading a message.

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          15 hours ago

          I can’t express in words how incomprehensible it is to me that you’d suggest I edit my comments for accessibility on something like Lemmy. I don’t care if people who would already get mad or offended by this have an easier time reading it, and people who are curious can ask questions if they please.

          Don’t elevate this place to a level that demands unpaid labour. It gives more legitimacy to the libs and chuds that dominate it.

        • borari@lemmy.dbzer0.com
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          14 hours ago

          I’d argue that someone who doesn’t understand all the words in that post received a lower than average education. What specific words do you think wouldn’t be universally understood by someone with an “average to mid-high” education?

      • jellywithin@lemmy.zip
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        15 hours ago

        And about the words you choose, I hope you don’t use this language in your daily life. You would make a terrible friend for everyday conversations